:Peer Edit take two

This peer edit was very helpful. I was able to see what mistakes I made and how I could fix them. I also was able to see how I could come across clearer to my audience. I need to explain some of my terms better. It was helpful to hear from a reader what they got out of my paper. I just need to work on my editing skills from now on and try to get a read into the papers deeper. I need to work on picking out mistakes. I need to also improve my writing and make sure I’m clear to my audience. I would like to work on making my point really well and trying to justify my claims better. Overall these kinds of classes really help.