They way the one essays subtlely explains how relationships change a person, really gets the audience to relate.
The description of the feelings and surroundings allow the reader to picture the scence that is taking place in the story.
The dialoge used in the narratives allow the person to feel like they are right in the story with the writer and are experiencing the moment as well.
They don't come right out and say their point. The actual meaning of the story is interpretted by the reader by subtle clues left by the writer.
Hooks the reader by talking of a topic that all can somewhat relate to...relationships that don't work out exactly as planned.
Uses the scene of seeing the two kissing to make the reader feel sympathetic towards the writer.
Ends in a way that doesn't leave the reader hanging or left asking questions.
I NEED>>>
More dialog
More description
More creativity
Better organization
Less of coming right out and stating my point
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