Peer Edit Narrative

The peer edits this past week really helped me when editing my final draft of my paper. The advice I recieved from my partner really helped. I was able to change parts in my narrative paper that either didn't fit or explained too much. I also added more dialog because my partner felt it would help my paper. I found that there are ways to be more clear without jeopardizing my writing by changing it completely. All I had to do was rearrange sentences to make them more clear and concrete. Also by reading my partner's paper i was able to see other ways to go about organizing my paper. I really like these peer edit days because they really help me as a writer and allow me to get an opinion of a person who would be reading my paper. I also like them because others can catch mistakes that I personally don't notice.